Earlier this week we did the Caleb Warnock interview with the podcast (http://www.writingsnippets.com/). He had some good information, but even better he was actually willing to critique some of our writing. He said that the fact that I got to read the whole page was a good sign, but he also admitted that he didn't give us everything he was thinking.
I read the first page of Mae and the first page of Undersea. I'd like to know what people really think when they read these things. I'll have to listen when Lily gets done editing and see what they sound like. I only noticed one egregious error while I was reading, which is unusual for me.