tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7381938904139198926.post7169854405957539523..comments2023-05-29T04:31:48.702-07:00Comments on Eclectic: Cover Blurb for UnderSeaLaurenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04137538450232783883noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7381938904139198926.post-73470402943138994682012-12-28T09:16:19.260-08:002012-12-28T09:16:19.260-08:00One more example of why editing is so important. I...One more example of why editing is so important. I'd mentioned Noyyewan, then I took him out for the blurb. I've fixed it.<br /><br />Thanks for following this. Cover blurbs seem so much simpler than queries.<br /><br />LaurenLaurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04137538450232783883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7381938904139198926.post-65494733407824174722012-12-28T09:04:57.814-08:002012-12-28T09:04:57.814-08:00Is "...she's sent out with to find...&quo...Is "...she's sent out with to find..." missing a key word? Your introductory/hook paragraph is a good hook.Jeff Hargetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14198367021884647821noreply@blogger.com